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The kiss
Contributed by
gribba
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Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It is the place where
The fantasies begun,
Where you can disconnect from the world.
It's the temptation,
The temptation of the mind,
The temptation of the body,
The temptation of the eye.
As you talk
I can see your lips moving
Shootingly to the sound.
My eyes fantasy about those
Lips closer to mine,
While talking to my body.
Copyright ©
gribba
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2003-05-06 18:35:00]
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Re: The kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 11:22:08 PM AEST
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| Very nice! I can relate to your poem, I like it a lot. Good work... |
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Re: The kiss
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 11:53:04 AM AEST
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"talking to my body" - love that! Great write! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: The kiss
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by harmoni on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:47:52 AM AEST
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| GREAT POEM HARMONI |
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