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GOODBYE MUM
Contributed by
Ochonochar
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Saturday, 17th March 2012 @ 06:34:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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88 years inflicts a toll
Is this my Mum that's lying there
A twist in life reversed our roles
It's my job now to give the care
Her eyes search mine to end the pain
To give some peace in these last hours
Watching life’s energy slowly drain
From what was once a Scottish Flower
My heart cries out to help some way
To be the pillar she can lean on
You can go join Dad I softly say
Then with hand in mine, she was gone.
Copyright ©
Ochonochar
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2012-03-17 18:34:10]
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Re: GOODBYE MUM
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 17th March 2012 @ 10:30:42 PM AEST
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| very beautiful and very touching- the best souls are the souls that are bared for all to see and learn, thankyou for that |
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Re: GOODBYE MUM
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 18th March 2012 @ 12:19:16 AM AEST
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| You can go to join Dad........you gave her permission to go, the kindest gesture at the most difficult of times,your words written in deep care and love a beautiful keepsake. |
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Re: GOODBYE MUM
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by spud on
Tuesday, 4th September 2012 @ 10:52:21 AM AEST
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Hi,
Her legacy sparkles when her offspring
can speak so eloquently and so devotedly
of a mother who was truly loved.
The heather bells will ring in Heaven.
Tommy
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