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A beautiful lesson to Men
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kalika_vidya
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Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
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Woman is the true form of the soul
And she is the foundation of the world
Whatever form she takes
Either the form of a man or a woman
She is the soul of all beings.
In woman all things abide and
All beings live and move.
Is there a jewel dearer than a woman?
Is there a status superior to that of a woman?
No kingdom and no wealth can be
compared with a woman and
No destiny is there to equal
that of a woman-
There is no holy place superior
to the heart of a woman
No prayer does equal the virtue of a woman,
There are not, nor have been, nor will be any riches
more valuable than a woman
Know that woman is the primary cause of the creation
And the basis of the universe
And the supreme Lord himself stationed in her soul
For the man who adores her feet with love
And who sees the shining deity in her heart
The golden gates of heaven will be opened
And he will be chosen as the lord of angels
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 07:03:59 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, and so true a message
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 07:20:19 PM AEST
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| dearest kalika, this is beautiful, the last four lines are really pretty too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by exiled on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 09:27:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. just to let you know. I already knew all of that, No one had to teach me. And the guys you have to teach that, arent worth the time.
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by Chase on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 11:30:07 PM AEST
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I dont understand, men are really women inside? lol
This is a good poem, but i think you went over the top with the whole women are the cause of creation, and he who sees the diety in her heart shall go to heaven. Thats a little much.
I thought that women faught for equality. And now you are saying men are nothing and women are th ekey to heaven and creation?
Plz explain.
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 02:09:51 AM AEST
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| You are no where in my mind when i wrote this poem..please don't take it lesson for any individual..but thanks for your comment.. Kalika |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 02:17:06 AM AEST
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| Did I say men are nothing...no.. what I said is if any man fails to see the divinity in the heart of a woman he will be never qualified for the divine love..my point is very clear..Thanks for your comment. venkat |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 02:20:43 AM AEST
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| Thanks a lot..my dear friend.. kalika |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 02:46:13 AM AEST
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| Thanks for all the comments..one thing I must specify.. the source of the poem is "Surangama Tantra "and It was done into Telugu by my father ' Venkat ".. the same also appears in Ajit Mookergee's book " Kali, the feminine force ".. after taking into consideration of both versions I wrote this poem..as I loved its message...please don't take it as a personal criticism or a fight against men ..men folk just read and enjoy..Kalika |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 03:21:05 AM AEST
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| Oh! baby, the poem is well written.. but the fore word to the poem does not look nice when desire to write poems based on my idealogy you better take my advice before writing it or atleast before posting it.. o.k next time take care..venkat |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 02:00:05 PM AEST
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| Well done with this beautiful message my hubby already knows he was taught well how to treat women! Christina |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 08:11:26 AM AEST
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| AMEN TO THAT |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by harmoni on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:43:33 AM AEST
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| NICE WRITE HARMONI |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:08:03 PM AEST
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This is an amazing write, truely beautiful in almost every way, though my only critism is on what an earlier comment said and you did explain, it is very strong in the feministic ideals, being someone who personally has no faith in his gender, i read this and it only hightens some of my feelings that women are 'the better sex' and men are worthless creatures only here for one thing, which is always on thier minds.
But as you said its not a slur or stab at men and i respect that
This is a truely remarkable, pleasant, insightful and timeless read
Luke |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:37:42 AM AEST
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| I have never read like this..your a strong woman.. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:50:47 PM AEST
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Wonderful lesson indeed. Thank you for the exceptional write.
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by linladen on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:57:26 AM AEST
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Hello kalika_vidya,
OK, Itz correct. Do all women b like this.
i think it could best suit for the women
of ancient age or Lord kingdom.
Open Ur eyes and look into the city today.
every woman leaves some destruction
in one way or other. Yeah they r powerful, they can dance as per their wish, they can switch sides as per their wish, turn one fool by a single nail touch, bring down one by a single fake smile !! U r correct women r powerful in that way !! y dont u talk abt the born-with-ego chars ? y dont u talk abt a womans feeling of always expecting someone to propose to her
and considers that as a victory to her womanhood, infact forgetting that they have played with some men life.
talk abt doing anything to make 2 or 3 men fall and leaves him there down and down and down dreaming of her with a friend/brother slogan at end. women
cross sides by their fake smile or words and infact easy for them to spoil others .Yeah they r powerful that way.
C, infact u finished the poem and commented as below --
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"All women should learn this and shall be able to teach this lesson to their men..that is my sincere wish.. please read and enjoy "
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C, the above lines by u clearly bring down women and show many chars of a woman transparently.
Pure true woman are rare to find these
days.... !!
Ask any of ur boyfriend !!
If u behave ok, men will be 10000 times
sweeter than u.
Ask any of ur boyfriend !!
I just told what i felt kalika_vidya. Take a
survey today, i may win that election by full majority !!
karthik bala guru
sdcckarthik@yahoo.com
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by linladen on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:12:44 AM AEST
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Hello kalika_vidya,
The poem is nice but the meaning ??
OK, Itz correct. Do all women b like this.
i think it could best suit for the women
of ancient age or Lord kingdom.
Open Ur eyes and look into the city today.
every woman leaves some destruction
in one way or other. Yeah they r powerful, they can dance as per their wish, they can switch sides as per their wish, turn one fool by a single nail touch, bring down one by a single fake smile !! U r correct women r powerful in that way !! y dont u talk abt the born-with-ego chars ? y dont u talk abt a womans feeling of always expecting someone to propose to her
and considers that as a victory to her womanhood, infact forgetting that they have played with some men life.
talk abt doing anything to make 2 or 3 men fall and leaves him there down and down and down dreaming of her with a friend/brother slogan at end. women
cross sides by their fake smile or words and infact easy for them to spoil others .Yeah they r powerful that way.
C, infact u finished the poem and commented as below --
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"All women should learn this and shall be able to teach this lesson to their men..that is my sincere wish.. please read and enjoy "
***
C, the above lines by u clearly bring down women and show many chars of a woman transparently.
Pure true woman are rare to find these
days.... !!
Ask any of ur boyfriend !!
If u behave ok, men will be 10000 times
sweeter than u.
Ask any of ur boyfriend !!
I just told what i felt kalika_vidya. Take a
survey today, i may win that election by full majority !!
It doesnt mean that I dont like girls .
karthik bala guru |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by ammalu on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:25:39 AM AEST
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| 'Devotional' - not acceptable by all and disputed too as seen from the comments - it's real - 'ego' concept is there - however the chracterstics of a woman appear in any gender are admirable like this - enjoyed - good write. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by buchi on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:24:07 PM AEST
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No kingdom and no wealth can be
compared with a woman and
No destiny is there to equal
that of a woman-
Despite their power and influence "a woman"
this poem balanced , figurative, image-based simple yet powerful write. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:45:14 PM AEST
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| That was a very good write. Excellent. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by darkplaidbabe on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:54:10 AM AEST
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very well written kalika, the only questionable thing is the seeing woman as a god, men are beautiful in thier own ways and without them we ourselves(women) would be lonely and lost. in any case poetry is writing simply what you feel and though this is obviously a controversial poem, i love it for the very reason that you wrote simply what you felt. kudos to you kalika! this was very thought-provoking either way! good write.
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by Rxqueen on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:06:27 AM AEST
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| Kinda feminist... I think women are evil... But written nicely. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:30:11 PM AEST
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| What a great message |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by imaginestars on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 02:20:13 AM AEST
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| It's seems your very passionate, and I can truly appreciate that. But without our men, life would not hold much meaning in our passions. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by SidneyCid on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:54:53 PM AEST
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Dear Kalika, Very clearly it is gleaned that you are a WOMAN, and you are stuck on the gender for sure. But, please believe, you cannot create without that wonderful hunk, the brute. You write beautifully, but I like it rhymed. Yours truly, SidneyCid
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:55:56 AM AEST
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| great piece of work...jh |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by Somnium on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 04:09:43 PM AEST
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| Isn't it great how women fought for years for equality for men and now their daughters are ruining that by turning this world in to one where casual sexism against men is socially acceptable. We may be able to vote and work but the mentality of the nation perpetuates this female masagonism. This poem is just an expression of your ego. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:45:31 PM AEST
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| God created man first and from man created woman. Just remember that a woman needs a man to create a life. |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by UnmovedMover on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:29:16 AM AEST
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| This is possibly the most ignorant peice of Feminist propaganda bulls*** I've ever read. Insert the word man every time the poem says woman and imagine how offensive that would be if someone posted it. Now think about all the great poems on this site and that this piece of s*** is the most read in this category... |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by Craze on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 02:16:55 PM AEST
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| really now |
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Re: A beautiful lesson to Men
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by lipsofanangel on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 08:13:17 AM AEST
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| This is so true, they should learn this and they wouldnt lose so much |
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