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The Lil Boy
Contributed by
trisha
on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Seems like yestersday
You're a baby.
EveryDay I look
Your growing up fast.
Seems like yestersday
I was holding you.
Seems like yestersday
Sis was your word.
Seems like yestersday
I was telling you to slow down
I can't keep up with you.
Everyday your differents
Seems like yesterday
You're listening
Seems like now
We're listening to you.
You have your whole life to go
I just can't believe you're turning
Five soon
Copyright ©
trisha
... [
2003-05-06 17:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: The Lil Boy
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 05:16:08 PM AEST (User
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I like this one a lot. I have really felt this way. Actually I know how that feels right now. Because it seems like just yesterday I was holding my bestfriend Jamie's neice Courtney in my arms and now she is 5 and has a mind on her own. She is the greatest little girl. This is very good.
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Re: The Lil Boy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 07:05:29 PM AEST (User
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good write they grow up so fast
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Re: The Lil Boy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 11:46:43 PM AEST (User
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trisha this was a very good poem...well done |
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Re: The Lil Boy
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:48:21 PM AEST (User
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such a good poem, one of your best
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