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Keep Me in the Dark
Contributed by
areasonforbrokenwings
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Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 02:48:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Keep me in the dark
I don't want to know your ways
Tell me sweet lies
Test how well I know your face
Blind me by the darkness
Let it take me in
The darkness, it keeps me safe
I don't want to be let in
So shut all my blinds
Don't tell me your secrets
Lie to me, baby
I promise it's better this way
Keep me in the dark
I don't want to know your ways
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Re: Keep Me in the Dark
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 15th March 2012 @ 07:34:30 AM AEST
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| I find it interesting that you are asking someone to keep up their walls. Perhaps you are being ironic or sarcastic, or expressing your anger towards this person. Whichever way it falls... nice poem. |
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Re: Keep Me in the Dark
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by jd on
Thursday, 15th March 2012 @ 11:39:58 AM AEST
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| i like this one |
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Re: Keep Me in the Dark
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 18th March 2012 @ 08:03:09 AM AEST
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| i completely get it. basically it is coming to a realization that once everything starts to come out it's like it's all ruined..it's no longer fun once the "honey moon" stage is over and you start to see the real person underneath..but one day you will want to see all of someone, or they will want to see all of you and will be willing to accept you for you..eventually you have to let someone in...i feel like maybe it's you holding the walls up and maybe you have been hurt enough that you just can't seem to let down your walls in fear of being hurt again..maybe..i don't know..thats just my take. |
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Re: Keep Me in the Dark
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd March 2012 @ 04:21:39 PM AEST
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| it's good, I like it |
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