|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
still falling where last i loved
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
|
©Cari Buziak
Signatures By The Tired Lion
it's a shame he can't be here to see
the smile upon my face brought with our memories
i think, well, now he's sleeping over there across the sea
his may be closed, but he opened my eyes
and i thank my lucky stars i knew his love
forever in the heart of me
forever he'll be a part of me
~*~
i sit here with mellow candles burning
many nights like this i sat here yearning
now my life his love i must forgo
i don't care my hearts all aglow
love for him has simply overflowed
still in my mind i hear him saying,"whoa!"
where he snores is way northeast above me
and i wonder; does he still love me?
i am his once forever ladylove,
~*~
still falling where last i loved...
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2003-05-06 15:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: still falling where last i loved
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 04:24:05 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
so very beautiful
Shari
|
|
|
Re: still falling where last i loved
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:09:03 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nessa, this is beautiful. Absolutely wonderful.
sleepless_siren |
|
|
Re: still falling where last i loved
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 03:15:44 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
With embers still burning
He dreams with heart still yearning
Remembering how it use to be
When two hearts were free
Love is everlasting
Tho flames to embers may be
Wistfully he remembers your smile
Each time you touch in memory
~~~~~~~~~~~
Your poem is excellent maam.
|
|
|
Re: still falling where last i loved
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bongo on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 02:43:04 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Northeast may be right
But to snore in the night ?
An almost romantic write.
Seriously,
I know that this is written from the bottom of your heart and i wish the direction of your words was more to the south west.
|
|
|
Re: still falling where last i loved
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 11:47:54 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Awww Ness...I can only imagine how you feel...you have written about this so well..
Especially liked--->
"and i thank my lucky stars i knew his love
forever in the heart of me
forever he'll be a part of me "
Be strong, grrlfriend...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: still falling where last i loved
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinb on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 01:25:55 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
simply beautifully written with strong emotions |
|
|
Re: still falling where last i loved
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 11:56:30 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow and wow... |
|
|
|