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SHE NEEDS A HERO
Contributed by
hray42
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Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 12:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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she needs a hero
she needs him to walk straight through that door
she needs him now like never before
she clears a table
she has taken a job at a local place
she has stress in her heart, and stress on her face
she needs a hero
she needs him to step right out of the pages
she needs him to be handsome, strong, and courageous
she wakes too early
she fixes herself up every morning
each day passes, no hero, no warning
she needs a hero
one like those in silent films of yesteryear
one to leap from the screen and hold her near
she needs a hero
where in the world does a true hero lay?
she can't wait for tomorrow, she needs a hero today...
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hray42
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2012-03-14 12:15:22]
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Re: SHE NEEDS A HERO
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 02:04:15 PM AEST
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I could quite easily say good write Rene. But I know you are not Rene none the less good write.
Greetings
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Re: SHE NEEDS A HERO
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 04:04:16 PM AEST
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| Really beautiful poem, i like the way you write, |
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Re: SHE NEEDS A HERO
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by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 15th March 2012 @ 05:44:06 AM AEST
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Dear respected hray42,
Like this heroine of your poem
I badly needed a heroine truly
When I was a young boy, man
I never could get a kind company
I enjoyed your poem very much
As what you have now described
Had actually happened in my life
The title only must be changed
As "He needs a heroine"
I thank you for this nice poetry.
With best wishes, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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