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love's feverish phenol
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a fever burned strong within' my heart
living now upon my skin it imparts
so hot to the touch, the skin it yearns
with waves of feelings it's fire burns
hot fever, dwelling deep within' my soul
white flaming poisonous; love's phenol
whilst love's dying began turning to opaque
loneliness watched; beside love's grave wake
i should have seen way past love's charm
and known my heart would come to harm
i don't care anymore, let me go quietly insane
giving my heart away is a self destructive bane
fever of love's leaving has left me barking mad
love still lives inside my heart, monomania, egad
no longer hope, for deeply happily in love i fell
love's fever resides to dispel love's fare thee well
'til passion's inflamed furnace burned
love did enjoy an evanescent sojourn
under many piled quilts with love's fever i will crawl
within' a tomb of madness, for love's darkened fall
a diluted solution of carbolic acid may be the only salve
healing once again love's feverish presence, now halved
this fever either overwhelms me; or i am being absorbed
going round n' round within' my mind, as an ever moving orb
~*~
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ladyfawn
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2003-05-06 15:35:00]
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Re: love's feverish phenol
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 04:27:20 PM AEST
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absolutely wonderful write my dear friend,,but very close to feelings I have had..my heart breaks with you
Shari
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Re: love's feverish phenol
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:11:44 AM AEST
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You choice of words is perfect. It creates these amazing images in my head and I feel as though I am experiencing it all with you.
Another wonderful piece of work!
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Re: love's feverish phenol
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 11:53:13 PM AEST
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Great write....heartbreaking......
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Re: love's feverish phenol
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by norm on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 05:46:59 PM AEST
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I once had a girl who said no
and married another bo
life ain't that sweet
there's sometimes defeat
but things syraighten out, don't ya know... |
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Re: love's feverish phenol
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by norm on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 05:48:57 PM AEST
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I once had a girl who said no
and married another bo
life ain't that sweet
there's sometimes defeat
but things straighten out, don't ya know... |
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Re: love's feverish phenol
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by colinb on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 04:33:25 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written full of emotions |
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