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I Still Believe in Falling in Love (Even when you fail)
Contributed by
Rose
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Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 12:59:01 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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I gave my true thoughts to him the other day
I had tried to speak them, but was nervous to say
So after a weekend break, I put my feelings down
On a greeting card I had designed
Short, but direct, hand delivered without a sound
I see him daily, wishing I could read his mind
Then I think, perhaps how foolish my heart had been
If no word by now, then I guess the last option did win
I had said if I didn’t hear from you at all, that would be ok
I guess my mind and heart was delusional
For I really didn’t think the last option would be the way
I guess I feel a little less secure, my heart in seclusion
My stupidity to offer such an easy way out
My own foolishness, possibly him laughing about
I should have known, I didn’t really have a chance
I am not fancy nor pretty or really all that advanced
Just a plain country gal, nothing in the cultured view
Wondering why in the **** I even tried for you
I never wrote or approached a man before
It took all I could muster to spill my hearts core
I must have struck out, for nothing has been said
Falling in love is tough, my heart so openly read
Now I guess I know the answer, if this is true
Nothing said, my emotions, not sure what to do
Aimlessly thinking thoughts that may not be right
So I’m trying to think well, my feelings to fight
It was I who started it, so I deserved this
Love is not clear, just the tears in my eyes of mist
Foolishness strays the heart way too much
I wish I had someone to give my love touch
I did try, so I failed,
Healing and wisdom to be hailed
In this heart of mine, I still believe in falling in love
Someday, my heart again, will have someone to think of.
Amber Rose Yeager – August 3, 2002
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Rose
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2002-08-04 12:59:01]
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Re: I Still Believe in Falling in Love (Even when you fail)
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by Suzy on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 01:33:26 PM AEST
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Sometimes all it takes is time and maybe he is just trying to sort out a way to let you know his feelings....I'm glad that you didn't let this experience run you off from the idea of falling in love we all must learn and grow from our experiences...great write Amber it's so full of emotion...I hope he does give you an answer instead of leaving you in silence...
Best wishes to you
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Re: I Still Believe in Falling in Love (Even when you fail)
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 03:45:42 PM AEST
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Hi friend,
One has 2 take chances in life and luv is certainly baffling 2 both Men and women.
A friend once told me, "If u go into a relationship in the right frame of mind
then one want be dissappointed."
he taught me that we r all free spirits,
One is no less importent
than any other......
I earned so much but
He said if we learn from our
broken romances then
it will have been worth the risk
we take.....
Number one u aren't stupid!!!!
#2 Life's like a big ole
box of chocolets,
ya never know what ya gonna get!!!!
U let your feelings be known
that takes courage!
The importent thing I've
learned from our global family here
is NEVER GIVE UP ON LUV!!!!!!
peace, luv, hope, COURAGE,
emy
By the way very GREAT WRITE HERE!!!!! |
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Re: I Still Believe in Falling in Love (Even when you fail)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 04:39:49 PM AEST
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Amber, I'm glad you took the plunge, even tho it may seem silly to you now... It took a lot of courage to do what you did, and I'm proud of you. Give him a lil more time... don't give up yet.... lovely write.
I miss chatting with you, and hope we meet up soon...Till then, keep the faith.
(((hugs)))
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Re: I Still Believe in Falling in Love (Even when you fail)
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by Silverwings on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 04:54:28 PM AEST
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I like the flowingness of your poetry... It reminds me of my first love, which ended in a heartbreak. I felt so stupid, like in your composition.
Your poem has a certain flow...
Like the waters of love,
it never stops going.
It might lead to a different path,
but it will always keep flowing!
~*Silverwings*~ |
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