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My Own World
Contributed by
Bookgoddess
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Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 01:41:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My world has gone dark.
Shadows swallow my broken heart.
I am at home where no one can find me.
The shadows caress my body.
The silence fills my ears.
The shadows hide my tears.
All silencing my fears.
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Bookgoddess
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2012-03-14 01:41:48]
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Re: My Own World
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 05:41:37 AM AEST
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| It is good that you no longer feel that way :) but i agree that it is difficult to finish a poem when you are no longer feeling the emotion. Some of my best pieces were written spur of the moment when i was feeling an emotion very strongly. |
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Re: My Own World
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 04:15:35 PM AEST
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My happy Gabby,
yomammaw luvs u bunches. I'm so happy to see you posting on my home site.
U r agreat writer and I know your talent will take you on an amazing trip.
Big huggs, much luv,
yomammaw |
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Re: My Own World
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by HIV on
Thursday, 15th March 2012 @ 11:34:01 AM AEST
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| really good realy dark. |
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Re: My Own World
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by hray42 on
Tuesday, 20th March 2012 @ 07:52:01 AM AEST
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| i really like this overall.. i actually LOVE the 2nd line.. pretty awesome.. and yes.. although it's hard to go back and finish a poem, sometimes there are just some wonderful tidbits to find here and there.. looks like you found one.. take care.. |
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Re: My Own World
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 21st March 2012 @ 03:16:33 AM AEST
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Welcome back from the dark, and into
the light of day! Blessings, Rob |
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