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Sing My Lonely Song.
Contributed by
Malevolent33
on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 05:22:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The rhythm of my hymm deeply hidden within me. It rings a song , a deep full meaning to me.
It paints a vivid picture , a real beautiful master piece. Like the death of a star, the natural gasses just release.
I've kept an open mind , because it helps me to see. It's taught me that even the blind can be a visionary.
And blindly my soul keeps searching forever alone , just leaves me to sing along, to this blissful song.
Alone , I sing my lonely song.
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Re: Sing My Lonely Song.
(User Rating: 1 ) by ammar on
Wednesday, 14th March 2012 @ 09:59:07 AM AEST (User
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Indeed, your song is full of deep meaning and "paints a vivid picture" with its rich imagery.
Keep writing
Ammar
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