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Goodbye
Contributed by
Nitha
on
Friday, 9th March 2012 @ 04:10:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I looked into your eyes I saw nothing.
The feeling we had is gone.
The stories you told me were lies.
The games you play with my heart I lost.
I jumped like a child when I see you.
I ran to you like a fool.
I loved you, as you hate me and man thats not cool.
The pain I feel when you touch me, kills me deep inside.
I just wanted you to love me but I'll be telling myself a lie.
You stoped doing all the fun stuff.
Holding and kissing me so,
Now you checking my phone is so minor.
Clocking the times I come home.
Your showing me your true colors.
I want to be left alone.
The pain you put in my heart
Is growing at a rapid pace.
Not once have you told me you loved me, not once have you said, you ok.
My sheets stay cold in the evening while you stay out all night.
Its time for me to leave now.
Goodbye
Dear Lonely Nights
Copyright ©
Nitha
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2012-03-09 16:10:30]
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Re: Goodbye
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th March 2012 @ 04:24:24 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Ellewood on
Saturday, 10th March 2012 @ 06:33:59 AM AEST
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| very nice piece--I could feel your emotions in your writing. I hope things work out for you...good luck |
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Re: Goodbye
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 10th March 2012 @ 10:29:35 AM AEST
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| make sure to let them know how you feel. Often times that can be the problem. I feel your pain. Good luck. :) |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Raggie on
Monday, 9th April 2012 @ 04:03:42 AM AEST
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| You can certainly write from your heart, and be clear in doing so. I think you will go far:) A very good write. |
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