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www.iloveyou.com
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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when far away from one you love
when hearts are given or taken thereof
when placed on a pedestal love-
will fit like beautiful leather glove,
your sweetheart lives in another hemisphere
sometimes what they say isn't always clear
life's biggest joy that brings you cheer
an email letter where love calls you dear,
sometimes your heart must be a seer
to understand and help things adhere
like the stars, online love can disappear
and 'vanished' the one your soul endears,
online love is an exciting new frontier
remember they are human, nothing is mere
sweetness of love is as real as your breath
every word is vivid felt, and taken sincere,
don't get me wrong this love can be full
and around your being truely peaceful
and just as real and just as mournful
when joy is gone n' your left with the bull,
when far away from one you love
your heart is blissed or hurt thereof
when placed on ones monitor of love-
will it fit like beautiful leather glove?
or do you sit and wait for them to appear
connecting together becomes a career
throughout all difficuties you persevere
@ www.iloveyou.com my dear.
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-05-06 11:35:00]
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:26:20 PM AEST
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very beautiful, good write, love is love no matter how you look at it
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:05:31 PM AEST
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"Love knows no distance,
Love knows no laws..
Love understands and grows
In spite of human flaws.."
Lovely write, Ness..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by exiled on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 12:02:00 AM AEST
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another great write ness. I love it.
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 09:17:41 AM AEST
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This is great. I really loved it Nessa.
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 11:11:59 PM AEST
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beautiful Nessa!!
Michelle
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by Bongo on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:50:03 PM AEST
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True
And well written
For online too
I have been bitten |
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by norm on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 07:40:34 PM AEST
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the usual wonder of your words
poetically speaking..little birds
but contents sent to foreign land
can come back simmery and bland.
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by princesspurty on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 08:11:53 PM AEST
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| very well put! |
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Re: www.iloveyou.com
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 03:59:08 PM AEST
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Written with wit and precision, my dear!! The world became a whole lot smaller with the invention of the internet. The possibilities are endless. Internet love is just like any other, it takes two to tango. Love this, it gave me a laugh. :)
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