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THIS LIFE WILL BE THE DEATH OF ME
Contributed by
hray42
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Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 10:05:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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this life will be the death of me
apparently, that is the way it must be
shoulders sore from the weight of the world
i closed my eyes, and then my head swirled
one hand is full of the hair i have pulled
the other is empty from when i was fooled
i sit and examine walls that are bare
leaves me to wonder if i should even care
this life will surely be the death of me
i sit here frail, as any of you can see
i tried hard, and still i am incomplete
i fought bravely, never hearing the retreat
but fight as i may, i just sink in the mud
then fall on concrete with a resounding thud
who will take up my flag, who will carry on
who will be there for the victory song
it will not be i, this i do fear
this life will be the death of me my dear...
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2012-03-06 10:05:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: THIS LIFE WILL BE THE DEATH OF ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th March 2012 @ 11:17:22 PM AEST (User
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Oh another sad and emotive write. I really do hope you are ok. Do not give up.
Ill tell you stuff has happened over the past four years that I could and would have never imagined, and believe me when I say I have had some real doozies lol.
(This is why I wear long shirts) cause Iv had both cheeks chewed right off HA HA HA I better have made you laugh!
Ok awesome write........ hang in there and keep on keeping on........... you can!
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