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Unintentional
Contributed by
Cellardoor666
on
Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 03:06:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I think I need to kill you
Maybe you should leave
Because if you stay i'll kill you
and blamed is what i'll be
But if I were to kill you
with a knife stabbed through the chest
Why should I be blamed
This is not my mess
You drove me to it
Committed your very own suicide
I wish i'd done it slower
Made you suffer for your lies
When the truth rot on your lips
Why did you survive?
Breathe your last and remind yourself
You died for your lies
Copyright ©
Cellardoor666
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2012-03-06 03:06:16]
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Re: Unintentional
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 03:57:58 AM AEST
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| hahaha i freaking love it. That totally is teenage angst. Very strong words :) |
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Re: Unintentional
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by hray42 on
Saturday, 10th March 2012 @ 02:03:02 PM AEST
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the 1st line shot right out at me.. i laughed a lil.. it just hits so fast and hard.. i like this poem a lot.. yes, even though i like to try to wrie a masterpiece here and there, i also like to write quite bluntly like this.. good job, take care..
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