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IN THE GARDEN
Contributed by
hray42
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Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 03:59:31 PM in AEST
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life seems to be slipping right by
sooner or later everyone must die
so together let's take a chance
to bury the dead and hope for romance
i stepped out into the garden today
i held a flower as it withered away
a group of clouds made an interesting show
there for a moment, but then had to go
an old song was playing in my dizzy head
it's original author i felt must be dead
deeper in thought i slowly went
my life and my money, they were both spent
into the contortions of hell i hastefully crept
as my mother sat by a window and wearily wept
strange feelings inside had quickly grown
my wishes were lost when the candles were blown
i tried to lay down and sleep there 'til night
you thought i was wrong, but i knew i was right...
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2012-03-05 15:59:31]
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Re: IN THE GARDEN
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 05:02:23 PM AEST
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The wonders nature can arouse in one! Quite a sad ending from what I read but it is inspiring to know that we must "bury the dead" and look for hope in life. Take care and God bless,
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Re: IN THE GARDEN
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by shereal_14 on
Friday, 16th March 2012 @ 10:26:05 PM AEST
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| Love it! You truly have a gift for words...keep 'em coming! |
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