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Eaten up Inside
Contributed by
HIV
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Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 01:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't know anything
don't know if I'm truly some body
I feel so out of place,nothing seems to be going my way
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!
sometimes I would pray,just to see if anything would happen to me
or is it all just make believe
so many times I've felt blood only it's a dream
I feel so strange as I feel all these feelings flow through me
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!...
Feels like you all are stabbing me!
As you watch me rot away!
You finally beg me to stay!
What do you want from me!
I'm Just A Human Being!! Living Life Full Of Pain And Misery!!
I'm Sick Of Being Every Bodies Whore! I'M SICK OF BEING EVERY BODIES WHORE!!...
for once! I'm Gonna Stand Up! And Please Me!!
I'm Being eaten Alive!
Feels like I'm rotting inside!
So many times I've tried!
Trying to make everybody happy with me!
Seems they just turn their backs on me!...
Feels like you all are stabbing me!
As you watch me rot away!
You finally beg me to stay!
But I turn around and say...
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HIV
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Re: Eaten up Inside
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by Blankman on
Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 01:39:14 PM AEST
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| GREAT poem. |
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Re: Eaten up Inside
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by gailj1432 on
Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 04:26:10 PM AEST
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| wow...very deep |
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Re: Eaten up Inside
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 8th March 2012 @ 09:52:38 AM AEST
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Immense power and anger is overflowing from my screen as I read this.
I have felt many of these things at points in my life and it sucks.
Life has it's moments, hold on to the good. Don't let the pain overpower the existence of the good.
Very powerful write.
Thank you for sharing it,
Brenda |
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Re: Eaten up Inside
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by ShaeBay on
Wednesday, 4th April 2012 @ 01:54:30 PM AEST
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The power leaps out of this poem, as stated. I find a lot of relation to myself in this poem. Its very moving and definitely inspiring. GREAT poem!
Shae Marie |
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