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Moons and Mirrors
Contributed by
duff
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Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 06:59:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Her love is a Saturday night
Eyes offer nothing but skin
Keys damned to the floor
Darkness clouds her rain
Strangers and silent alarms
Mascara hides a lonely city
Its buried beneath despair
Pretty cries but it walks in
Black tears in the sink again
The sum of decision creeps
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duff
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2012-03-04 06:59:08]
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Re: Moons and Mirrors
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th March 2012 @ 12:41:42 PM AEST
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Awesome write, friend.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Moons and Mirrors
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by shelby on
Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 12:19:29 AM AEST
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WOW this is wonderful
Michelle |
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Re: Moons and Mirrors
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 5th March 2012 @ 01:59:09 PM AEST
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"Darkness hides her rain"
This line painted a very vivid picture in my mind, both philosophic and artistic. Wonderful write. I will ponder its meaning. |
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Re: Moons and Mirrors
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by northernlights on
Friday, 9th March 2012 @ 12:38:09 PM AEST
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| It's all in the eyes,souless! eyes offer nothing but skin, noone looking out noone looking in,it is such a pleasure to connect to your writing. |
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Re: Moons and Mirrors
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by ming on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 01:00:58 PM AEST
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So many of your lines awoke in me...
as in you. :) This one alot
'The sum of decision creeps'
I see, time slow and moving backwards, and creep's we may or maynot encounter, all in this sentence. Awesome.
ming |
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Re: Moons and Mirrors
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 10:23:34 PM AEST
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enchanting, vivid, a beautiful write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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