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Devil Multiple Sclerosis

Contributed by hollywood10 on Saturday, 3rd March 2012 @ 07:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I'm multiple sclerosis,
also known as the devil.
My evil hypnosis will give you
the uncontrolled urge to laugh cry or yell.
The heat gets real hot,
So welcome to hell.

Only time will tell as symptoms get worse,
I'll disturb your vision, and yes it will hurt.
You may even go blind from my invisible dirt,
If you become prisoner of my invisible curse.

So forget about dancing,
Your limbs will hurt and go weak,
If you get too hot you'll pass out from the heat.
Some of my patients
are in wheel chairs as we speak.
Fatigue no matter how long you sleep,
It's never enough.

You have your good days but most days are tough.
Your muscles will spasm,
Prepare for a seizure.
I'll take away your sensations,
Some days you won't feel your toes.
You'll be dizzy and tremor,
depressed as you watch time go.

Oh, but that's just the beginning..
I'll paranoia you and,
Make you go manic.
Mess with your speech,
Cause such a panic.
You'll slur and forget your words,
Paralyze you from talking.
Like a mouse, won't be heard,
Like the cat got your tongue.

Hopelessly numb,
Those who don't know,
Assume you're drunk as you walk.
Those who don't know,
Assume you're high when you talk.
I'll shock you,
I'll burn you,
I'll squeeze you like a snake.
If you give up the fight,
Yours is the next life I take.

Copyright © hollywood10 ... [ 2012-03-03 19:15:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Devil Multiple Sclerosis (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 7th March 2012 @ 11:45:16 PM AEST
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This had to have been hard for you to hear. Are they sure this is what it is?
Im so sorry for your pain.
I can say to some point I do understand living with a life altering illness. I hope things improve for you. Well written verse and writing is very good therapy!

Hugs
Michelle

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