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Talking To The Sky
Contributed by
Blackheart
on
Thursday, 1st March 2012 @ 12:22:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hey Mr. Sky
Wassup dark clouds
I just need someone to talk to
I'm feeling quite down
Struggling to adjust to my surroundings
Of no one being around
While I walk this road
Hearing my own echo
Feeling the cold wind blow
This just about the exact same scenario
As the album cover of Eminem's Recovery
Just instead of him it's me
And Satan's face magically forms
From the smoke I exhale
What does that mean
And why it keeps happening
Is it a sign that I should turn back and leave
A forewarning that he'll eventually capture me
No matter how persistent I am or try to be
I know it means something
Because it wouldn't appear for nothing
There's always more that meets the eye
You're a perfect example Mr. Sky
I have no one to talk to
And since listen is all you can do
It's you I can look up to
So as I walk this road
With hopes of seeking redemption
I come to you with faithful intentions
All I ask of you
Just show me what I have to do
Guide me at all times
Teach me all guidelines for survival
I hope to find a great friend in you
And hope to live another day
So we can spend a day or two
And most importantly
Hope to see you in my victorious ending
Of my Road To Redemption
Copyright ©
Blackheart
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2012-03-01 12:22:27]
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Re: Talking To The Sky
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by CARAAAAA on
Thursday, 1st March 2012 @ 10:15:07 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Talking To The Sky
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by hray42 on
Thursday, 1st March 2012 @ 10:24:45 PM AEST
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| Your poem is really cool... I always like poems about skies.. |
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Re: Talking To The Sky
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 06:48:07 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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