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Out of the Ashes
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Monday, 27th February 2012 @ 05:41:04 AM in AEST
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A tree... it grows and branches out, to all that it may reach,
and with an axe... of raging fire... this tree... saw its defeat,
but even from... a blackened heap... of soft and precious ash,
there will come... a brand new life... and pain will be its cast,
sheltered in a cast so pure... it wont succumb to death,
for icy hands can never burn... but only steal a breath,
so small and weak, this brand new life... surrounded by the past,
but even ash can take to flight...till rain does make it crash,
upon the ground, and when it rests, the rain will bring it life,
where it will grow... once again... and branch into the light.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2012-02-27 05:41:04]
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Re: Out of the Ashes
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by sia on
Monday, 27th February 2012 @ 07:09:25 AM AEST
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| very inspiring! makes you hold on to life even during the toughest patches. great work! :) |
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Re: Out of the Ashes
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by emystar on
Monday, 27th February 2012 @ 06:25:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful work.
Huggs, blessing,
emy |
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Re: Out of the Ashes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2012 @ 11:28:27 PM AEST
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Ah, the cycle of life, while cruel it can still be beautiful. Man is indeed part of the cycle, for after all, we are all here for a reason. This poem captures a lot, somewhat subtle, yet, not so subtle. Me likes.
Thank you,
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Re: Out of the Ashes
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by Skippa109 on
Thursday, 1st March 2012 @ 04:13:02 PM AEST
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| How lovely :) |
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Re: Out of the Ashes
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by Cellardoor666 on
Thursday, 8th March 2012 @ 03:07:38 AM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery. You're very talented :) |
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Re: Out of the Ashes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th March 2012 @ 08:52:05 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful, love it. |
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