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A breath of beauty
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Monday, 27th February 2012 @ 04:38:17 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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The eloquence of morning air does rest upon the mind,
and with deep breath and proper thought, your beauty will unwind,
not beauty that does lie skin deep... but hidden deep within,
a tranquil gorgeous epithet... is longing to begin,
a simple living, breathing, thing... that dwells within your soul,
that begs to burst out of your mind... within a rain of gold,
to glimmer in the summer sun, beneath a bright blue sky,
where beauty stays and never fades... within your lover's eye,
so walk with me and sing a song, to beckon all your dreams,
and watch creation come alive, within this tranquil scene.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2012-02-27 04:38:17]
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Re: A breath of beauty
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by sia on
Monday, 27th February 2012 @ 06:55:46 AM AEST
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| Beautiful work... |
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Re: A breath of beauty
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 28th February 2012 @ 07:29:20 AM AEST
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| Smooth words that carry along. I loved the flow of this, and the beauty it described. Great write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: A breath of beauty
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Wednesday, 29th February 2012 @ 12:02:14 AM AEST
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My initial reaction to the last line was "okay" and that was simply going to be my comment... okay . However, I was then afraid that you would think that I only thought this poem was okay, which is definitely not the case.
So, I'm changing that initial one word comment of okay to, oh yeah!!!, WOW!
Thanks,
Tim |
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