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Burning
Contributed by
lifefadingaway
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Sunday, 26th February 2012 @ 10:10:25 AM in AEST
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Didn't you say the tides were turning?
I don't think I've seen any change yet,
except maybe, the bridges burning.
Your clothes smell like gasoline,
we all carry lighters these days.
Let's go for a moonlight swim,
the sea is just across the street.
I won't tell when things are changing,
didn't you see, my eyes are closed.
I'm off telling those lies.
To anyone who will listen,
to anyone with ears.
Maybe I'll scream.
Didn't you say the tides were turning?
I haven't seen you since forever,
I think I saw your life burning.
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Re: Burning
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th February 2012 @ 10:49:53 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Blessings
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Re: Burning
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 26th February 2012 @ 01:51:20 PM AEST
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Hello,
I read your poem and find your style to be very different. I know I am not perfect, but i think poems should have some consistency and the words should flow. The point you are trying to get across it seems is that your angry with someone because they did not change to be what you want.
I wish you luck in writing future poems and if you would like any help, let me know.
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