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Sanguine
Contributed by
Ingredients
on
Sunday, 26th February 2012 @ 01:11:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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These written words of pages plied
My linguistic tools on which I rely
Are all my drug to keep me sane
They pause the world and numb the brain
My reckless pen scrawls gibberish
Thoughts radiant in design
A mystery to the world
Conceptions I divine
Through negligence of sound regard
I repeat my ill mistakes
Fix these holes that leak the truth
Fix my constant aches
Problems seem to cultivate
They multiply for sure
Not long now
I have my fix
For now I must endure
As leaden lids slip down my eyes
Torment calls with nights disguise
I pry apart my brittle mind
Rummage through my hidden core
Expose these secrets long confined
The answers I've been waiting for
But sanguine skies spell journey’s end
To join my body as I ascend
Velvet clouds, translucent shrouds
They hinder my escape
I shut my eyes to my demise
This torture I can’t take
Raking sheets of memories
Unfurl within my grasp
Whispered thoughts spit poison truth
My mind is torn aghast
I plead my soul to let me through
I need this prize, which I attained
The speck of light is just in view
But still the haze remained
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Ingredients
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2012-02-26 01:11:09]
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Re: Sanguine
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by Aspirant on
Sunday, 26th February 2012 @ 05:20:34 AM AEST
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This is brilliant. You have a wonderful smooth, simple style in this piece.
I can very much sympathize with what you've written here as well. All the best to you. |
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Re: Sanguine
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by shereal_14 on
Friday, 16th March 2012 @ 10:30:46 PM AEST
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| I must say that this is one of the best abstract poems that I have ever read in my entire life... and I have read quite a few... you definitely need to get some more out here, and try to get yourself published if you are not already published... you have a very great, special gift. You are a fool if you decide to waste it. Take it from someone who already knows that. Good luck, and best wishes. Shereal_14 |
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