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Foundation
Contributed by
stacylynng
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Friday, 24th February 2012 @ 03:31:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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We tried to cheat without grasping tenor,
skipped the foundation, to our home we entered.
The walls buckled and structure collapsed,
Seemed like eternity, few moments elapsed.
Finding composure in a sincere, "I'm sorry",
changed the ending and prolonged our story.
Forgive and forget, lets start anew,
Back to basics to avoid adieu.
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stacylynng
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2012-02-24 15:31:23]
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Re: Foundation
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th February 2012 @ 07:22:58 PM AEST
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Sometimes going back to the basics is the best place to start. It is the simple that makes life great:) Wonderful write, I enjoyed the positive.
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Re: Foundation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2012 @ 12:22:11 AM AEST
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No, never did that bud sadly I do know that love is sometimes not enough.
Nice to write about it, though. Poetry = good therapy. Nicely written.
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Re: Foundation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2012 @ 01:44:21 AM AEST
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* but sadly
not bud. D'oh! |
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Re: Foundation
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 25th February 2012 @ 10:24:57 AM AEST
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| I have definitely done that. It rarely works out. :p although once it did... but later ended. |
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