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Holding on to her pain
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 11:49:30 PM in AEST
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She holds onto to her pain
she holds on to her past.
Relives it again and again
Makes the circle last.
Driving people away
and she finds herself alone.
She won't take a step back
she just won't let anything go.
It's eating at her heart
her soul has turned to ash.
She always has a story
or some made up lie about her past.
She is holding on to her pain
got it held tight in both hands.
She will not let it go
but I fear she will not last.
I won't walk the road with her
not another step
because her ash and soot
are smothering all my breath.
Move on..........
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2012-02-22 23:49:30]
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Re: Holding on to her pain
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Friday, 24th February 2012 @ 04:04:12 AM AEST
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Powerful write describing how sometimes
we hold onto what we are most familiar
with, even pain, to find anything worth
keeping. That is a sad human condition
we need to let go of to find purpose and
meaning to life itself. I hope you aren't
describing yourself Michelle because you
have a beautiful heart full of talent and
love to share. Blessings, Rob |
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Re: Holding on to her pain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2012 @ 11:52:21 AM AEST
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I've been down that road before, a long time ago. Can only do so much for people.
Beautifully penned, my dear.
Tim |
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Re: Holding on to her pain
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by HIV on
Friday, 24th February 2012 @ 03:52:01 PM AEST
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thats beautiful and ive met many people like this you feel so sorry for tham and wont to help but they push you away and seems there pain will never go away.
good write
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Re: Holding on to her pain
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 27th February 2012 @ 09:54:36 AM AEST
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Beaitiful, powerful and poignant poem Michelle.
Ah "letting go is sweet!".
It is the desperate clinging to the past that makes it so wrong, and unwillingness to go forward. and grow.
Fond memories are fine, but not stubborn and selfish clinging to past things.
God is in the PRESENT" - PURE PRESEN
CE.
Present, Past and Future are one eternal moment
. .
Thanks for sharing this exquisite work.
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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