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The Deer.
Contributed by
bikersme
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Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 11:40:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sun beats down
the sky is clear.
nothing stirs
but a soleful deer.
The wood is cool
a breeze through the grass.
The deer is alert
with eyes like glass.
He skips through the trees
silent and soft.
down by the lake
on a carpet of moss.
A few sips of water
he raises his head.
A pheasant takes flight
the deer has fled.
He returns to the meadow
enjoying the sun.
Bouncing over streams
but he knows they will come.
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2012-02-22 11:40:42]
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Re: The Deer.
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by davidcactus on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 12:34:28 PM AEST
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| A very descriptive poem and a joy to read. Keep it up. |
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Re: The Deer.
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 12:47:15 PM AEST
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| The imagery in this is great! It read with such pleasure. I really liked this. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: The Deer.
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by hippo605 on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 01:29:08 PM AEST
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| It tells a good story that can be present in our lives, not just his. I liked it. |
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Re: The Deer.
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by DrogedaRain on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 04:01:49 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful write indeed... =) |
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Re: The Deer.
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by Raggie on
Friday, 13th April 2012 @ 07:02:16 AM AEST
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| Ahh I did enjoy this. Such imagery, I felt as though I was there. Lovely:) |
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