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No One At All
Contributed by
Kira-KILL-xx
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Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 03:11:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I walk along this stretch,
This stretch of lonely sand,
I realize new things,
I never could comprehend.
Loneliness surrounds,
While couples are holding hands.
Jealousy is profound,
My tears roll onto the sand.
No one is really there for me,
To catch me when I fall.
Using and abusing me,
Whenever I stand tall.
All I want is him,
Not much at all.
No one is really there for me,
As I fall, to help me up.
No one is really there for me,
Except for my true love.
The beauty of the beach,
The colours of the sky.
They all seem so dull to me,
Without you by my side.
I can't help but to wonder,
If you feel the same.
Like your heart is torn asunder,
When the weeks only detain.
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Kira-KILL-xx
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2012-02-16 03:11:21]
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Re: No One At All
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 12:59:33 PM AEST
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I like this one a lot. This poem reminded me a lot of a poem I wrote a long time ago and in that poem I was on the beach, alone.
The last line in the poem reads:
Yes lonely sky, lonely beach, nevertheless I love the best.
It was basically about how I'd rather be with the one I really love (even though I wasn't) than anyone else, no matter how great that "other person" might seem.
Nicely done,
Tim
The boldest of moves cannot dissuade true love.
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Re: No One At All
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by hray42 on
Friday, 23rd March 2012 @ 11:01:54 AM AEST
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| very nicely written.. i like it a lot.. and, like your other commenter, it reminded me of traces of some poems i've written.. anyway, good job.. |
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