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Limerick: The Bed (or is it?)
Contributed by
aJerm
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Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 03:22:08 PM in AEST
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And even if you do, hope you'll like it too! 'Cause it might be too lame of a joke... In that case: my apologies.
The Bed
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It's nice when you find yourself in it,
On return it may smell like a ****pit,
It's where you were made,
and the lovegame is played,
"I know: It's my bed, right?"
HAH, is it?
I tried to make a limerick by the way.
Copyright ©
aJerm
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2012-02-15 15:22:08]
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Re: Limerick: The Bed (or is it?)
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by aJerm on
Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 03:12:23 PM AEST
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Sorry I'm apparently doin this the wrong way. But I don't get what the FAQ entry means by 'post your request in the right forum topic'. Didn't find the topic.
Please, can someone delete this? My opinion is, this poem sucks. And since I'm the author, I'm entitled to say that, and in my opinion also to request removal.
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Re: Limerick: The Bed (or is it?)
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by aJerm on
Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 03:13:13 PM AEST
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And if you read this, and agree with me that it sucks, please give me another chance.
I'm proud of the poem I posted before this.
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Re: Limerick: The Bed (or is it?)
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by Ellewood on
Saturday, 18th February 2012 @ 06:41:35 AM AEST
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| oh it is okay--do not beat yourself up about this --it made me laugh and that is okay. You get it--do not give up. I dont always write the best poems--some are good ,and some are okay--you will get the hang of it...good luck |
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