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To Miss Something You Never Had
Contributed by
aJerm
on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 02:15:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is my first poem ever, that I wrote just to write.
Sort of meant as a songtext, but there's no music yet.
It's probably really cheesy or even bad, but I had to share it.
to Miss something you never had
Ho to miss something
you never owned,
you never felt,
you never had.
It's not occasional,
but structural sadness.
Fundamental to my state of mind.
Yet the weak link
in the construction I call I.
How to miss it,
whatever should be there.
Seen it in others.
Lack it myself.
How to miss something you never had.
I'm the expert,
The man.
Of useless melancholities.
Light pain,
but everlasting.
Chronically insatiable,
unsolvable unhealable.
Even by the best drugs life can offer.
The healthiness and joy
in all other aspects. Mental. Physical.
They are a placebo.
Of which I'm constantly aware.
Copyright ©
aJerm
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2012-02-15 14:15:01]
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Re: To Miss Something You Never Had
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by Kailas on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 02:22:55 PM AEST
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| Your poem isn't bad it's really nice and you should write more! :) |
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Re: To Miss Something You Never Had
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by ICEKASH on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 10:35:15 PM AEST
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| Yeah , you will get better . stick to it |
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Re: To Miss Something You Never Had
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by purplestary on
Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 03:19:47 PM AEST
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| you have talent in writing even though it's clear you do not know that. i just wanted to say it. just keep writing..you will no doubt get better, and i look forward to reading more. |
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Re: To Miss Something You Never Had
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by Shadowman on
Wednesday, 29th February 2012 @ 03:30:43 AM AEST
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| I agree with the other that came before me, as well as state that I can feel just how confused to explain your feeling in this poem. I think that's what I liked most about it, that the feeling in it were genuine and not implied. All in all it was good write, but don't stop there, keep writing. ^^ |
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