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unnamed
Contributed by
fluffy42
on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 03:10:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Letting you in
allowing you to see
this darkness in me
you do not run
how can this be
do you not fear this in me
but what is this I see
you have darkness . . .
just like me
can you maybe fix me
or help this darkness within me
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2012-02-15 03:10:06]
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Re: unnamed
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by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 06:33:13 AM AEST
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| expand create a series i would read them |
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Re: unnamed
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 06:58:33 AM AEST
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short and good
well done. |
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Re: unnamed
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by aJerm on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 02:44:46 PM AEST
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| Very nice |
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Re: unnamed
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by purplestary on
Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 04:52:55 PM AEST
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| intriguing. makes me want to read more..learn about the journey to find someone who maybe has the same darkness, who can maybe fix the darkness in you..i love this. can't wait to read more. |
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Re: unnamed
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by bmjones0555 on
Saturday, 18th February 2012 @ 02:50:18 PM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: unnamed
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by Kailas on
Monday, 20th February 2012 @ 08:07:00 AM AEST
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| short and still very amazing, write more! :) |
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