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Secret Admirer
Contributed by
EerieCrate
on
Tuesday, 14th February 2012 @ 07:36:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your Beauty is a blade
For It cuts me deep
No blade is so sharp
It kills the week
My blood is my love
Though it falls to feet
You cover your blade
and fall into sleep
As I lye in my pain
The thing that heals
The wound from your blade
Is knowing I may
Fall asleep and be and be cut the next day
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Re: Secret Admirer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 06:39:45 AM AEST
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| spell check grammar check and yes it was a good first poem read some of mine to see what a developed style is i have a evil sense of humour |
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Re: Secret Admirer
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by bmjones0555 on
Saturday, 18th February 2012 @ 02:52:39 PM AEST
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| Not to bad |
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