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She
Contributed by
xxxsilvervoodooxxx
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Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She walked over to me,
I had never seen her face, but somehow I recognised those eyes.
I can't say I wasn't nervous,
I was completely terrified, something about how she looked at me.
She was absolutely beautiful,
I was staring at life without flaws, life without any pain or tears.
I heard her whisper softly,
at first I couldn't understand, but the longer I listened the more I actually heard.
She was telling me about herself,
about who she was and what she was, why she felt the way she did.
Somehow I felt every word,
everything I thought, she knew, and I realized what she was.
She was me,
the answer I had been searching for, the hope I had been holding on to.
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2003-05-05 17:35:00]
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Re: She
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 09:59:53 PM AEST
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very good write
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Re: She
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by Ravan on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:53:16 PM AEST
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| That happened to me many years ago. Due to the realities of life all we share now is love across distant miles. Well phrased and something I can really feel inside. Good job. |
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