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Paranoid Insomnia:
Contributed by
Kira-KILL-xx
on
Monday, 13th February 2012 @ 10:41:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I can barely close my eyes,
Without emotional demise.
Up my spine runs a chill,
These thoughts I try to kill.
Seems inevitable to me,
That he will do as he please,
No matter of a consequence,
I drop trembling, to my knees.
We are among a monster,
But barely anyone agrees.
Not a human, an imposter,
Around all happiness flees.
Get me out, feels so wrong here,
It's a monster, plain and clear.
Forget gaol, death penalty deserved,
By it I am massively disturbed.
It's face a grotesque obscenity,
Never felt hate with such intensity.
Tries to ruin the beauty of love,
In his hands lay the dead dove.
I wouldn't care for it's death,
I wouldn't care for it's last breath.
I'm bound my pathetic laws and rights,
Otherwise I'd end it's life.
Copyright ©
Kira-KILL-xx
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2012-02-13 22:41:43]
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Re: Paranoid Insomnia:
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 14th February 2012 @ 06:57:05 AM AEST
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Re: Paranoid Insomnia:
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 01:06:20 PM AEST
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Again, I am so sorry that this ***** happened to you but I am of the opinion that a person like that does deserve death.
Poetry can be therapeutic.
On another note, your writing reminds me a lot of my earlier days of writing. The encouragement of others help to keep me going so...keep up the good work.
Take care and be well,
Tim
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Re: Paranoid Insomnia:
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2012 @ 01:07:54 PM AEST
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P.S. On the mention of reminding me of my earlier writing, I meant style, not subject matter.
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