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From A Sister To A Brother
Contributed by
izzyisawriter
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Monday, 13th February 2012 @ 06:20:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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My Letters to you are written in red ink
On postcards with pictures of pretty things
Hastily scrawled with hopes that you'll remember me
But my words are lost to you like waves in the sea
But they are still just as numerous
My hopes for you still shine, luminous,
My faith in you is almost humorous
Becase my efforts only bring me futileness
So I'll let go of who you were to me
Because that person is now just a memory
And while I may never know the person you will become
I will rest in His arms because what's done is done
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izzyisawriter
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2012-02-13 18:20:03]
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Re: From A Sister To A Brother
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th February 2012 @ 02:17:12 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC,
Good writing.
Blessings,
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Re: From A Sister To A Brother
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by Kira-KILL-xx on
Tuesday, 14th February 2012 @ 02:34:21 AM AEST
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That poem is quite sad, it is sweet though, in the way that you are still trying to.. Reconcile with the brother.
It is beautiful.
It sounds like something you could make into different sections.
Hope to read more soon.
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