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Cloud Prince
Contributed by
icekash
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Monday, 13th February 2012 @ 10:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Rain pours and thunder roars
Reminds me of some ancient lore
A prince was in love with a maiden so sweet
Everyday hiding from the world they would meet
Their love was pure and as precious as they come
Some were happy for them, unhappy were some
The unhappy, being jealous, enchanted them with magic
That soon turned their love story, to a tragic
For one was element to water, other to fiery heat
But they couldn't keep em away, they didn't retreat
When they came close to each other, both drifted away
She turned to ashes, he turned gaseous grey
He is the cloud prince whose hurt is so deep
He searches for his beloved and so he weeps
His tears fall on the ground where the ashes fell
He was desperate for a touch but could break the spell
Drop by drop he will be close to her in due time
It'll stop when he'll be near her or when he is blind
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Re: Cloud Prince
(User Rating: 1 ) by SanctifyingSarah on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 02:58:39 PM AEST (User
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This is a great story! Did you make it up on your own or was it inspired by something? It really got me emotionally involved and sympathizing with the prince. Great job, I enjoyed it! |
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