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All you said was a lie
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Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 06:10:02 PM in AEST
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Say what you might,
Do what you can,
Start this fight,
Or take my hand.
Look at your eyes,
Feel the pain,
See the lies,
can you change?
Call me young,
So are you.
Although I stay strong,
While you follow.
Did you ever really care for me,
You never said.
The truth I will never see,
Unless you see me as I am.
Jealousy is a feeling,
Now that you're open,
What I see is revealing,
Still I will never tell.
So now you go on your own,
See what you did,
What have you shown?
Why couldn't you end this fight?
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Re: All you said was a lie
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 09:38:19 PM AEST
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Re: All you said was a lie
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 13th February 2012 @ 12:30:00 PM AEST
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| fantastic write and I know how you feel as I have been through being called a liar when I am not. If they can't face the truth they are not worth stressing about. I can feel your sadness at not being believed in your poem...great write...stay strong and stick with telling the truth |
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Re: All you said was a lie
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by lisasolorio1 on
Wednesday, 15th February 2012 @ 11:08:29 PM AEST
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In alot of ways ( more than I care to say) I know the feeling of not being trusted. Good poem.
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