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Done
Contributed by
lisasolorio1
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Thursday, 9th February 2012 @ 02:56:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I sit in this chair,
Life past and unfair.
Do I imagine what was once and now gone.
No regrets for I know nothing can be undone.
Sitting here as my mind truly ponders,
Amazed at my feats,
As my mind truly wanders.
No more regrets shall I have I believe.
Knowing in my heart is what I truly deceive.
Can not stop for my soul would be broken.
Misery and pain my unsaid token.
Struggling with this pain,
I close my eyes and refrain.
Holding back these tears,
Too long have I held these fears.
Time so cruel to speed this fast,
Aging unstoppable,
Life will not last.
Nothing can be said or done,
For mine is already on its last run.
No regrets I say but truly do not mean.
This life gone and next will be seen.
Copyright ©
lisasolorio1
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2012-02-09 14:56:23]
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Re: Done
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th February 2012 @ 06:38:57 PM AEST
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I love the wording and message. I think the rhythm is a little jarring, but overall - a nice poem.
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Mickey. |
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Re: Done
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 10th February 2012 @ 05:45:39 PM AEST
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| True commentary on the facts of life. I like the way it flowed. Nice write. |
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