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Daddy Why?
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Daddy, why don't you love me?
Daddy, why don't you seem to care?
Daddy, why aren't you proud of me?
Daddy, why must you cause despair?
Daddy, why wasn't I good enough for you?
Daddy, why can't you accept who I am?
Daddy, why wasn't I wanted by you?
Daddy, why do you seem like you're just a sham?
Daddy, why do I still need you?
Daddy, why can't I just let go?
Daddy, why do I still want you?
Daddy, why was our relationship so hallow?
Daddy, why has it been almost fourteen years?
Daddy, why am I still that little girl inside?
Daddy, why do I still cry so many tears?
Daddy, why do you have to hide?
Daddy, why did you break my heart?
Daddy, why are you so hard to find?
Daddy, why did we ever have to part?
Daddy, why do you seem so blind?
Daddy, why haven't you ever come to see me?
Daddy, why can't you see that I need you
Daddy, why is this what our relationship has come to be?
Daddy, I still love you.
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 12:50:28 PM AEST
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very good write...very good questions...i lost my daddy to the bottle when i was young... it took years for me to come to terms and sometimes i still haven't
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:10:04 PM AEST
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I lost my Father, because of a choice that he made. He has chosen not to see or contact me in the last 14 years. And sometimes I still wonder why he has made that choice. But I still love him and I know that I always will.
Thanks for the comment.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 03:01:10 PM AEST
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Sad and so heart-wrenching..... I am so sorry this is so.. perhaps it is not too late to maybe reach out to him???
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by Metalmouth666 on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 09:51:57 PM AEST
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| This was a very touching thing to read for me, I bet it was hard for you to write, but I may be wrong, I hope things get better for you... |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:02:50 AM AEST
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Yes it was extremely hard for me to write this. But I have found that writing about things that are very hard for me to write about can be quite healing.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:01:54 AM AEST
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| Hey this is good but I wish your dad can see this |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:06:01 AM AEST
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I would show it to him but I do not know where he is.
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:43:38 AM AEST
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I would reach out to him, but right now I do not even know where he is. I have been lookig for him for about 3 years now, I just haven't found him yet. But I hope that I will.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 07:10:50 PM AEST
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| maybe someday you could show him this... but if it has been fourteen years since you spoke, maybe print it in the last known newspaper in the area you last know of him being, my best wishes to you, this is sad but so heartfelt sincere it is lovely:) big hugs nessa |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 09:13:24 PM AEST
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Thank you for you comment. It will be 14 years since I have seen or spoken to him this coming Christmas. I will think about you advise. It is worth a shot a the very least.
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 07:16:16 AM AEST
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Hi Candice,
This is truly a saddening plea indeed. So many strong personal feelings you've put into this piece, and I can relate to it mostly.
Excellent writing again
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 01:14:21 PM AEST
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Dean,
I am glad that you like this one. It was very hard for me to write this poem. I have really tried to get over these feelings that I have for my father, but it never works. So I use my poetry to work out my feels.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Daddy Why?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:02:05 AM AEST
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| Great write. I wish most dads in the world would read this poem, and ask themselves if their feels this very way. Maybe then we wouldn't see as many children rasied in neglicted (or raised only by the mother) homes. Great poem! |
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