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Takin
Contributed by
THE_CELL
on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I watch over you as were takin
I'm falling over with my mind to take
Why was it hard for me to see
Looking at those time when i could break
It went for sooo long, you wished me well
i'll place my fate, under all my hate
Romming continues nights for all you could see
it could'nt of been soo loud for you
I'll be taking back what was said
All this pain that just desends
Watch you from across my room
I see that you Takin... Takin!!!!
HELP ME, TRY TO FIND ANOTHER WAY
TAKE BACK, WHAT I'M ALWAYS TRYING TOO SAY
TAKE ME, AWAY FROM THESE HIDDEN JESTERS
CUT IN, TO SEE THE BLOOD RISE INSIDE.
Copyright ©
THE_CELL
... [
2003-05-05 12:05:00]
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Re: Takin
(User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:48:03 AM AEST
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Has a lot of feeling in it. Very nice.
Always
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Re: Takin
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 11:11:57 PM AEST
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very good cell, i liked it
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