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darkness in me
Contributed by
fluffy42
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Tuesday, 7th February 2012 @ 09:29:49 AM in AEST
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I want too let you in
I want too open up and show
but im scared
I might scare you away
it is a dark place
not even I can see
and yet I still want you to see . . .
all that is me
I want to share . . .
it is new to me
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2012-02-07 09:29:49]
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Re: darkness in me
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 7th February 2012 @ 12:05:00 PM AEST
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Yes the darkness and un-knowen can be a frightful place
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Re: darkness in me
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by HIV on
Wednesday, 8th February 2012 @ 07:58:55 AM AEST
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i realy like this and i understand how u feel
and u could turn that into songs nice job man |
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Re: darkness in me
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by lisasolorio1 on
Thursday, 9th February 2012 @ 02:42:04 PM AEST
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How often are we too afraid to show the real person that we are because were afraid of that person not liking what they see.
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Re: darkness in me
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by purplestary on
Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 04:55:24 PM AEST
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| you have an amazing talent waiting to break out. i can't wait to see more from you. welcome to ypdc. make yourself at home because you belong here. love what I have seen so far. |
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