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daddy why
Contributed by
HIV
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Tuesday, 7th February 2012 @ 08:07:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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i feel so alone, like nobody cares if i would live or die
things happen to me,and you say its a lie
daddy your killing me inside
why do you do this to me
your ruining my life, taking my pride and replacing it with nothing
but painfull lies
daddy why your hurting me
just let me die
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Re: daddy why
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 7th February 2012 @ 12:10:13 PM AEST
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All I can say is that breaks my heart. I can only imagen what your talking about. God bless
Greetings
RR |
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Re: daddy why
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by mvvenkataraman on
Wednesday, 8th February 2012 @ 05:03:39 AM AEST
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Dear respected HIV,
I feel terribly confused by your poem
Still when I read your name and think
Surely my ideas are going rotten
Thinking like that itself is disgusting
This must be reported as a crime
And the so called daddy must be
Punished by law very severely
This should happen very soon
This is not acceptable to mind at all
Proper remedial steps must occur
Here a young girl shares her secrets
God and law must surely rescue
Nothing else can be now said
Only God must be now blamed
For giving human mind vulgarity
May God bless the child kindly.
Yours Prayerfully,
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: daddy why
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by Emvin on
Saturday, 11th February 2012 @ 05:01:29 PM AEST
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I can only imagine the sort of pain that made you write this cry for help.
Obviously, your stepmother is in on whatever your father is doing to you.
Seek outside help, and don't despair..
Evil will come to the surface sooner or later. |
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Re: daddy why
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th February 2012 @ 06:16:02 PM AEST
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Again very sad. I agree, you need to get help for yourself. Just do what cha gotta do and let the chips fall where they may.
blessings, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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