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MAKE ME CRY
Contributed by
fish
on
Monday, 6th February 2012 @ 10:13:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sing me those songs that bring me tears,
Play every note and make it clear
For with every drop my pain doth wear
So play, oh yes please play my dear
And let it pierce me like a spear
Till every tear in me is steered
To flow without shame nor fear.
Play me a movie
One with an epic setting
And emotional scenes
That leave me tearing.
Make me cry please
Like that some of my pains are eased.
Maybe you should try crying it out and see.
Copyright ©
fish
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2012-02-06 10:13:16]
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Re: MAKE ME CRY
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by Ellewood on
Monday, 6th February 2012 @ 02:55:30 PM AEST
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| I know many believe that crying is weak--but I truly believe that not only does it make me feel better , but after I have a good cry, I take on whatever is bothering me head on. I think everyone--male or female should have a good cry once in a while and do not ever feel bad about it. Thank you for such a nice write! |
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Re: MAKE ME CRY
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by The-Supreme-Reality on
Tuesday, 7th February 2012 @ 02:18:22 AM AEST
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| true...true...true... |
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Re: MAKE ME CRY
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by CoLDness on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 08:58:08 AM AEST
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very good
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Re: MAKE ME CRY
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th February 2012 @ 11:31:52 AM AEST
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another good write,
blessings,
emy |
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