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Alone i Break
Contributed by
THE_CELL
on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Pick me up
Been bleeding too long
Right here, right now
I'll stop it somehow
I will make it go away
Can't be here no more
Seems this is the only way
I will soon be gone
These feelings will be gone
Now I see the times they change
Leaving us, it seems so strange
I am hoping I can find
Where to leave my hurt behind
All the ***** I seem to take
All alone I seem to break
I have lived the best I can
Does this make me not a man?
Shut me off
I'm ready
Heart stops
I stand alone
Can't be my own
I will make it go away
Can't be here no more
Seems this is the only way
I will soon be gone
These feelings will be gone
These feelings will be gone
Now I see the times they change
Leaving us, it seems so strange
I am hoping I can find
Where to leave my hurt behind
All the ***** I seem to take
All alone I seem to break
I have lived the best I can
Does this make me not a man?
Am I going to leave this place?
What is it I'm hanging from?
Is there nothing more to come?
(Am I gonna leave this place?)
Is it always black in space?
Am I going take its place?
Am I going to leave this race?
(Am I going to leave this race?)
I guess God's up in this place?
What is it that I've become?
Is there something more to come?
(More to come)
Now I see the times they change
Leaving us, it seems so strange
I am hoping I can find
Where to leave my hurt behind
All the ***** I seem to take
All alone I seem to break
I have lived the best I can
Does this make me not a man?
Copyright ©
THE_CELL
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2003-05-05 08:35:00]
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Re: Alone i Break
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:53:48 PM AEST
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I liked this it was really sad and honest I feel. The questions you ask are questions I am sure many ask and they take a long time to answer. Great poem hopeto see more from you soon.
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Re: Alone i Break
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by MorbidAngel on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:37:53 PM AEST
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| I like this...uh...poem..Even if it IS the song by Korn "Alone I Break" |
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Re: Alone i Break
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 04:21:58 PM AEST
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are you seriously trying to pass this off as your own? its korn lyrics, no?
write something original and i'll be more than happy to comment on it. Kate x |
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Re: Alone i Break
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by THE_CELL on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 10:44:05 PM AEST
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| Hello everone that views and see's this poem and say's to themselves "This is Korn's lyrics"?? I know it's Korn's lyrics and i'm sorry to say that they are'nt mine. I wish they were, but i was new too this site and i forgot to put down this: "This song truly help's me out in the sad times and bad times of my life, i'v got Korn to thank for making and produing something like this. If you are wondering what i'm on about well this poem is lyrics from the band Korn and this song is on there album Untouchables. I like this poem and i thought i'd put this here and share it with few of you here Thank you". So that's it Thank you for understanding, if not then i understand. Thank you. |
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Re: Alone i Break
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by THE_CELL on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 10:45:47 PM AEST
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| Hello everone that views and see's this poem and say's to themselves "This is Korn's lyrics"?? I know it's Korn's lyrics and i'm sorry to say that they are'nt mine. I wish they were, but i was new too this site and i forgot to put down this: "This song truly help's me out in the sad times and bad times of my life, i'v got Korn to thank for making and produing something like this. If you are wondering what i'm on about well this poem is lyrics from the band Korn and this song is on there album Untouchables. I like this poem and i thought i'd put this here and share it with few of you here Thank you". So that's it Thank you for understanding, if not then i understand. Thank you. |
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Re: Alone i Break
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by deadly_blaZe on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 09:59:33 PM AEST
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| korn rules! |
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