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Reasons
Contributed by
richard2
on
Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 06:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Reasons
I have seen the bark
Torn by their rut
And touched the moss
Their instincts lost
I have seen a brain
Lying beside a note
That spoke of love
And more of fear
It lies between
The rifle and the deer
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2012-02-03 18:06:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Reasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by twriters on
Saturday, 4th February 2012 @ 04:47:07 PM AEST (User
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A poignant poem about the terrible pain of suicide and the terrible loss left behind. You use a few words to make a powerful point. The series of questions reflect the helplessness of those left behind. |
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