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The World
Contributed by
Delicious8181
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Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 05:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The World is full of excitement,
The Wold is full of enjoyment.
The World is full of love,
The World is full of happiness.
The World is full of strongess,
The World is full of goodness.
The World is full of hearts,
The World is full of full holiday spirit.
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Re: The World
(User Rating: 1 ) by twriters on
Saturday, 4th February 2012 @ 04:51:02 PM AEST (User
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Well, that is certainly a song of optimism! Very nice and cheered me up. I would suggest that you use a different word than 'strongness' |
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