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Shopping List
Contributed by
eddywinkles
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Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 03:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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So be it, this is the life, accepted of me,
Time to be the man I've grown up to be,
What is this?? who is this??
This is Chris, no-matter who takes the pi55,
If she was around more, it would come from the core,
to live the life, every man dreams of.....
NO MORE.
Copyright ©
eddywinkles
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2012-02-03 03:34:26]
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Re: Shopping List
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by davidcactus on
Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 04:26:42 AM AEST
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| Good attempt for a first time poet. Try to be more open in the future, so that readers will really feel what you are feeling and understand you more. Good luck Chris. |
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Re: Shopping List
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 05:19:06 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Good work.
blessings,
emy |
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