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little poem
Contributed by
darkmind
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Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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i miss my little poem
i threw it out in the wind
while standing underneath the stars
talking to an unseen jupitor and mars,
i miss my little poem
that sailed from my fingers
while the breeze blows through my hair
this feeling of beauty still lingers,
where did my little poem go?
but the air out here's so fresh!
the rain falling all around me
crystal diamonds kissed of bliss,
missin' that little poem..
sadley stood and looked its way
i saw the dark horizen line
and then my eyes went to the sky,
hello? little lost poem?
you're far more of heart's delight
becoming a shining star in the sky
sweet gift i was given this night!
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darkmind
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2003-05-05 06:35:00]
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Re: little poem
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 07:17:15 AM AEST
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| Aww! very beautiful.. very nice. you are truly a beautiful soul.. Kalika |
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Re: little poem
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 07:31:59 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..Lovely flow to this little poem...
Jenni |
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Re: little poem
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:41:18 PM AEST
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| wistful write... i much enjoyed your poem:) warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs nessa |
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Re: little poem
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by exiled on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 08:09:54 PM AEST
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Good poem darkmind. I really like it. Keep posting ;p.
exiled
better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not. |
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Re: little poem
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:20:56 AM AEST
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Welcome!! This is a wonderful poem. Keep them coming I will keep reading them!!
Michelle |
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Re: little poem
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 07:01:35 PM AEST
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| Welcome, darkmind! So glad you are here! Your poem about a poem is a unique idea and you write very well. I anticipate reading more good things from you. Your friend, Bizzy |
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