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Take Me Home
Contributed by
lastwaltz
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Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The sun is beating down like a hammer
My skin is swollen and red
My lips are as dry as the desert
And it takes too much effort to breathe
The beads of sweat are forming puddles where they meet
Yes, I cursed the rain, and now I'm dying in the heat.
The buzzards are circling up ahead
The locusts are singing a lonely song
The brittle, brown grass is begging for a breeze
And this old dirt road goes on for days
I'm not sure I can make it home before I'm beat
Because I cursed the rain, and now I'm drowning in the heat.
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2003-05-05 04:35:00]
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Re: Take Me Home
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 05:45:01 PM AEST
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| i Really love this!:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Take Me Home
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:27:28 AM AEST
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This is great!! I love it!
Michelle |
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Re: Take Me Home
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 02:47:55 PM AEST
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| ,Brings back memories all too vividly. Good write. |
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