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---The One Pure Soul--- (I'm 14, by the way.)
Contributed by
BlackRoseImmortal98
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Monday, 30th January 2012 @ 08:13:05 PM in AEST
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----------- The One Pure Soul -----------
I see a fire, doused in my heart, I see a mind, shattered into parts, I see a soul, slowly disintegrating away, I see a conscience, that has forgotten what to say. I now see you, almost every day, now I see hope, clouding my day. Thanks to you, my mind is returning, thanks to you, my soul is transcending. Thanks to you, it's all been brought back, thanks to you, I have a reason, and the strength to live another day. I am still adapting to show it, so come with me and gently sit, as I exclaim my love for you. Before, my future was bleak, I was slowly developing the soul of the weak. You came and tendered my wounded soul, and in the process, stole my heart, aswell.
I know it all sounds mushy, but it's how I feel, please believe, my love for you IS real. I speak these words from the depth of my heart, you are my one, the missing part... So, take my hand in yours, and together, we can open these doors, and push our way through this.
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Re: ---The One Pure Soul--- (I'm 14, by the way.)
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by malinsinbigler on
Monday, 30th January 2012 @ 08:55:57 PM AEST
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| Love this poem, such feeling and emotion from a person so young. Great Job! |
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Re: ---The One Pure Soul--- (I'm 14, by the way.)
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by davidcactus on
Wednesday, 1st February 2012 @ 01:06:56 PM AEST
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| A poem full of mixed emotions and feelings. Makes me think back to the time I was experiencing my first love. Keep on writing. Putting your feelings into poetry is a very rewarding experience. |
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